Date: 2006-05-15 09:50 pm (UTC)
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Beautiful writing. The imagery is just lovely.

I love her confusion when she first wakes... and trying to hold onto the memory but having it slip away.

The interaction between her and Spike is perfect; him so tender and caring, her transition from agressive to confused, to determined and then finally to the sweet, tender teasing as her memories returned.

I love the way you describe her reactions to stimuli all through this piece; without the benifit of memories to draw on it all comes down to senses and you do such a lovely job of demonstrating this.

It is a fabulous ficlet, Sweetie. Thank you!

And I'm so glad to see you back!!
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