Ack. I missed this somehow. It is so beautiful. Almost poetic in intensity.

If you ever need a beta for any of your stories don't hesitate to ask. Just send it attached in an email. If you don't want to wade through my long analyses just ask for a straight-forward beta. And, of course, you are still always welcome at fs. You wouldn't be the only member who posts infrequently. (I didn't see anything here that needed fixing, by the way).

Sorry, I was so late giving you feedback on this. I still wonder sometimes if I'm seeing all my flist.